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Take My Place

Sunday, June 6th, 2010

I’ve had the pleasure of getting to know some wonderful people so far in my writing career. Here’s a fun excerpt from a fellow Avalon author, Beate Boeker, who writes a case-of-mistaken-identity story. I really enjoyed her fresh voice and the story Take My Place. I hope you’ll check it out too!

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Maren has one big goal in life; she wants to keep her independence. Her life is full to the brim with her two roles – being a single Mom and the owner of the recently founded Start-Up-Company. Men, she figures, are too exhausting to add to the mix; after all, it took her long enough to recover from her divorce. However, one evening a business acquaintance plants his twin brother Tony in his place and Maren falls for him . . . until she sees through the masquerade. Brimming with wrath, she decides to take her revenge, but she hasn’t counted on her daughter who has quite different plans . . .
 
 EXCERPT:
 
Maren glanced at Chris as she walked towards his car. A sudden gust of wind whipped the firs behind the building and filled the night with a fresh smell of pine, but she felt warm and light. A deep happiness hummed inside her. Her words to Annie just a few hours earlier made her chuckle . . . she had claimed to be impervious to his charm. Talk about famous last words. How could a few hours make such a difference? How come she had never noticed the smile in his eyes? How come she had never been able to talk to him like that before, easy, relaxed, just being herself? Next to the warm glow of happiness, she felt a tinge of fear. She had no time for romance. She was so glad she had finally settled in her single life, settled herself, Sherry, her job. She had no time for upheaval, no time for change. Most of all, she had no time to be hurt.

Maren shook her head and gave herself a little shake. Enjoy the evening, she told herself. And don’t worry about tomorrow. Carpe diem. You know what that means, right?

In the car, she turned a little in her seat to watch his face. A street lamp threw its light on him, then darkness hid him again. The car smelled of leather and aftershave. A large advertising sign–was it Coca Cola?–filled the interior with garish red light. In one blinding moment of truth, she knew she trusted him blindly. Amazing. When a few hours ago, she would not have trusted him to post a letter. She smiled to herself when it happened. The car came to stop at a red light. A bright street light lit up the interior. She saw his profile cut out against the light, the way his hands touched the steering wheel, the angle he held his head. And all of a sudden, he did not look like Chris at all, but like a stranger she had never met before.

Maren caught her breath. She did not hear the sound of the motor anymore, nor smell the leather seat beneath her. The colors faded out of her world and left it black and white. She blinked and willed the picture to shift right back, pushed away the feeling of strangeness. But it did not change. He looked different. Not like Chris. . . no, not like Chris at all.

The street light changed to green, and he accelerated with confidence, but not in his usual style. On the way to the restaurant, Chris had raced his car as if chased, even if the next red light was only a few yards away. Now, he didn’t. As if he was someone else.

She swallowed. Maybe I’m losing my mind. Maybe I won’t recognize Sherry next. Or myself. Maybe I’m splitting apart. She stared at the back of her hand, the shape of her fingers. Everything looked familiar, like always. A wave of relief washed over her.

Maren twisted in her seat and stared at him. It was a trick of the light. It had to be. But at the next stop, he turned and smiled at her, and no doubt remained. The man next to her wasn’t Chris. Maren shrank back into the darkness of her corner. She couldn’t tell how she knew. She couldn’t point a finger at it; it was just a sum of little things, each too small to list. Suddenly, she remembered a voice she couldn’t put a face to. Had it been Paula, the receptionist at his office? They had joked one day about Chris and good-looking men, and Paula had said: “And then to imagine they exist in doubles.” Maren had laughed but had not been able to ask anything because Chris had arrived that instant. So the man next to her was his twin. Tony. The brother who owned the restaurant . . . if she could believe the story he had told her tonight.

She went through every scene at the restaurant again. It was so obvious, once she knew. When had the change taken place? She recalled the evening step by step. Of course–it must have been right at the beginning, before they had even ordered. That’s why he had been gone such a long time. If she thought about the things she’d said to him . . .! Maren winced. How he must have laughed at her. And the look in his eyes, which seemed so intense, as if nobody else existed–it must have been because he checked if she would see through the masquerade. Her throat hurt. Tomorrow, he would tell Chris everything, and they would laugh at their clever game. She found she was shaking. She threw another look at him. Everything had changed within the last thirty seconds, but he had no clue. She tried to take a deep breath but her chest was too tight. Maren curled up as much as she could. Her stomach felt cold and hard. From far off, she heard Tony say, “Are you cold? I’ll put on the heat.”

She did not reply. How dare he? How dare they do this to her? Those good-looking, ever-winning twins. Fooling the world, so they got what they wanted. Always. And to imagine she had fallen like a ton of bricks for his brother, when Chris was no danger to her. It was so humiliating. And it hurt. Oh, but why? Why do it at all? The radiator heated up the car. Maren still felt cold. Every muscle inside her bunched up, every bone ached. Fury rose within her. The twins were not going to get away with it.

“Maren?” His voice sounded dark and soft. “You’re awfully quiet all of a sudden.” She cleared her throat. Now she knew how to take her revenge . . . she would make him sweat tonight.

 

Take My Place

Contemporary Romance

by Beate Boeker

Publisher Avalon Books

Hardcover – makes a lovely gift!

Learn more about Beate here:

 

www.happybooks.de if you wish to order, click here:http://www.amazon.com/Take-My-Place-Beate-Boeker/dp/0803499426/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1268158528&sr=8-1

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A Special Treat – Excerpt from “Mari’s Miracle”

Monday, March 15th, 2010

I have a special treat today. I’m posting an excerpt from Award-Winning author Fran Shaff’s romance novel, Mari’s Miracle. I hope you take as much pleasure in this powerful scene as I have.

 Enjoy!

1914. Marigold Mahoney’s father has insisted she leave his palatial home in Minneapolis to teach school in dusty, little Heart Junction, South Dakota. Grit Truman agrees to be Mari’s driver even though he finds the spoiled little spitfire a challenge. But when a woman is as attractive as Mari, a man should welcome the tribulation. Sparks fly, and Grit begins to wonder who will end up taming whom.

EXCERPT

Mari’s father, an Irish immigrant, finally explains in his thick brogue why he sent her from his palatial home in Minneapolis to tiny, primitive Heart Junction, South Dakota.

“I’ve sent you to Heart Junction so you can learn to be independent, to take care of yourself.  You need to learn how to take care of yourself, Mari.  Perhaps when you’ve heard the story I am about to tell, you will comprehend why your gaining your independence is so important.”

Mari withdrew her hands from her father and folded her arms in front of her.

Wilson sat back and sighed.  “I had hoped all of my life that I could spare you from hearing this story, but I see that I must do something drastic to try to get you to understand why I placed you in Heart Junction.”

Mari bit her lips shut.  Maybe she’d listen to her father, and maybe she wouldn’t.

“You can wipe that obstinate look off of your face, Little Flower.  What I am about to say won’t be easy for you to hear, but, Mari, you must listen.”

She remained stubbornly silent.

“When your mother and I decided to send you on this journey, we did so because we feared what might happen to you if you did not know how to take care of yourself.  Since we made that decision, things have transpired that make us surer than ever that we made exactly the right decision.”

Mari opened her mouth to express a retort about her placement in Heart Junction, but she decided it was probably better to remain silent.

“We’re living in changing times, Mari,” Wilson continued. “While much of the progress that is going on around us is wonderful, there is also much that is happening that could be very dangerous to us.”  He paused and took a deep breath.  “There is trouble in the world, Mari.  Things are quite unsettled in Europe.  War has broken out over there.  Thousands of soldiers have already died.  High sources in America say it is very possible that our country may be drawn into the foreign skirmish.  If that happens, it won’t be only your brothers in the military who are at risk, Mari.  All of us will be in trouble.  Our economy may collapse.  If that happened, everything we know in life would then be subject to change.”  He squeezed her hand.  “Mari, if we lost our fortune, you would have nothing to live on when your mother and I are gone.  You would be at the mercy of your circumstances.  You could even find it necessary to sell yourself into marriage just so you could survive.  Or worse…”

“Father!  How can you say such things?  Why would you even think them?”

“I think these things because I’ve seen them happen.  I’ve seen horrors, Mari, that no human being should see.  I’ve known starvation, extreme poverty, frostbite and battles of all kinds.”

“No, Father!  These things could never have happened to you.  You are the strongest man I know.”

“I’m strong because I have known misery and poverty, Little Flower.  It is in adversity that we gain our greatest strength.  It is in survival that we learn to move forward.”

Mari placed her hands over her ears.  “Father, stop.  I don’t want to hear anymore.”

Wilson pulled her hands away from her ears.  “No matter how unpleasant you find my story, Mari, you are going to listen to what I have to say.”

Mari lifted her chin.  “If you insist, Father, then I shall listen.”

“I do insist,” he said firmly.  He sat forward and looked at her intently.  “Your mother, as it often happens with women, has suffered far more than I.  When I met her, she was subject to a tyrant who expected a great deal more from her than merely her service as his scrub girl.  He treated her terribly indecently, abominably.  That man was the devil’s own.”

“Mother was a scrub girl?”  This couldn’t be true!

“Indeed she was, and there’d be no shame in that, if that was all she was.  But her employer demanded much more of her.”  He closed his eyes tightly before he opened them again and went on.  “She suffered terribly, Mari, more horribly than any woman should suffer.  I wanted to take her away from Corrigan the moment I saw him touching her in his courtyard as I came upon his home to make a delivery for the man who employed me.  I distracted him with my business long enough for your mother to slip away from the courtyard.  When Corrigan went back inside his house, I searched for your mother.  I found her crying in the bushes behind the house.  I knew the moment I looked into her eyes that she’d been degraded and hurt by the powerful Mr. Corrigan.”

“Mother worked for a man who treated her unfairly?  It can’t be true.”

“It’s true, Little Flower, and he did much worse than treat her unfairly.”

Mari almost asked exactly what Mr. Corrigan had done to her mother, but she wasn’t sure she’d want to know.  If he’d beaten her mother…  A sick feeling filled her stomach, and she looked away from her father.  No.  Nothing that awful could have happened to her mother.

“Child, look at me while I’m speakin’ to ya,” Wilson said sternly.

Mari looked at him once more.

“Erin lost her parents when she was only fourteen.  She had no choice but to indenture herself if she wanted to stay alive, but she’d made no bargain like the one Corrigan forced upon her,” he said, shaking his head as his eyes grew dark.  “She was almost sixteen when I met her.  She was as beautiful back then as she is now.”

“Did you fall in love with her beauty, Father?”

“Fall in love?” he asked, furrowing his brows.  “No, darlin’.  As beautiful as your mother was then, neither of us had any thoughts of love.  All of our energy had to be focused on survival.”  He paused and took a deep, soulful breath.  “My heart went out to Erin when I saw her suffering.  I wanted to help her, but I didn’t know just how such a wish might be fulfilled.  Seeing her suffering troubled me something fierce, and I knew I couldn’t live with myself if I left her to the biddings of Devil Corrigan.  Eventually, I found a way for her to get out of her degrading circumstances.”

“What did you do, Father?”

He took another deep breath.  “My employer was intending to go to America.  He needed servants to accompany him on the long voyage.  I wanted desperately to go with him, but the only servants he’d intended to take along with him had to be a married couple.  He wanted both a male and female servant, and he could afford only one set of quarters on the ship.  Only a married couple would suit both his needs and his moral code.  I offered marriage to Erin so she could get out of her bad circumstances, and, by accepting my proposal, she offered me the opportunity to fulfill my dream of coming to America.”

“You married Mother when you barely knew her?  You married her without loving her?”

“Yes.  It seemed like the logical thing to do at the time.  By getting married we both got what we wanted.”

“But you and Mother are so much in love.  I believed you had married for love and been in love all of your lives.”

Wilson chuckled unexpectedly.  “My innocent little flower.  You have such an unrealistic idea of life pictured in your head.”  He touched her cheek gently.  “As it turned out, we could barely stand each other,” he said, drawing back his hand.  “The ride on that ship across the ocean was one of the most miserable times of our lives.  The only time worse was when we tried to find work once we landed in America after our employer discharged us.  Many folks in New York hated the Irish.  We lived on the streets for a long time.  We needed each other to survive, to keep food in our stomachs and to keep warm when it got cold.  Between the two of us we found many ways to stay alive.”  An odd look of good and bad reverie crossed his face.  “It wasn’t until Erin nearly died from a feverish disease that I realized how much she had come to mean to me.  Once she recovered, I saw to it that she grew to love me the way I’d grown to love her.  It was through our commitment and our need for each other that we grew to love each other.”

“Father, I am astonished!”

“I hope you are much more than astonished, Little Flower.  I hope that you now understand how important it is that you are able to take care of yourself.  I hope you comprehend just how hard life can truly be when circumstances get bad enough.  I don’t want you to ever be in a situation like your mother was in, nor do I want you to be as unskilled and helpless as we both were when it came to finding a way to survive.”

“But you’ve become such a success in life, Father.”

“Because I was lucky a few times, and because I worked very hard, often with little or no sleep and with lots of doing without, I did eventually make my fortune.  Many others of our people were not so lucky, Mari.  Many of them went on to live lives of poverty and starvation.  I don’t ever want my children to suffer as we did or as so many of our fellow Irish have suffered.”  He touched her chin.  “You think what I’ve done placing you here, Mari, was cruel, but I had good reason for my actions.  And now you know what they are, don’t you, child?”

Mari’s Miracle

By Fran Shaff

Contemporary Sweet Romance

Create Space, Paperback

ISBN:  1438254598

Smashwords, E-book

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